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His hands, so callus
Weathered by the trials of life
Becoming honest
Alright, so against my normal style of blank/free verse, I decided to do a Haiku (5-7-5).

It was kinda tricky. Never really did Haikus before--they hold so much in so limited a space. But I like it.
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drakmordis Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2010  Professional Writer
So much packed into the last line. Brilliance.
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DizzyTestament Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2010
Everyone seems to love that last line.

Cool!
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TwilightPoetess Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
That last line leaves a LOT to the imagination to be pondered over and chewed upon. Excellent work on this. I love the concept.
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DizzyTestament Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2010
Awww...:blush: thanks.
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